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 Sorry I'm late. I had an incredibly busy weekend (dress shopping for my daughter's 8th grade prom!) and I completely forgot about Writer's Block! *slaps self with wet noodle*
Do you like to sing? Hum along with your favorite song? Tap your toes or clap your hands when you hear a particularly upbeat, bouncy tune?
Then you have all the skills you need to recognize the different types of rhythm in poetry. It’s simply a matter of paying attention to the beat (accented syllable), and counting the unaccented syllables.
I will give the traditional names for the different types of meter, but memorizing the words “iambic” or “anapestic” isn’t nearly as important as learning how to scan a line, which means to analyze the line and mark the syllables as accented or unaccented.
When you begin reading a poem with the purpose of scansion, or determining the meter, it is important that you first note what kind of poem it is and what mood, emotion, or idea the poet is trying to convey. In most poems, syllables within a word are pronounced as they normally are, but the words which are accented may be different according to the poet’s intent.
For example, let’s take a simple sentence which you might say during an ordinary conversation. The situation: you are at a restaurant with a close friend or your significant other, who has finished eating but there is still food remaining on his or her plate. You might say, “Do you want that?”
Now, think of the various ways you might emphasize words in that sentence. You could point at the food in question and say, “Do you want that?” Or, if you’re not entirely sure the other person is finished, you might say, “Do you want that?”
Language is fluid and adapts itself to the situation. Therefore it is important to know whether you are reading a light-hearted limerick, which might have a more sing-song rhythm, or an ode or dirge, which would likely have a stately, formal sound.
Time to get down to the actual names of the poetic feet and the meter. Please read the example lines aloud if possible, although if your coworkers might look at you askance, by all means wait until you get home. Poetry is primarily a medium of sound, and is best heard with the ears as well as read with the eyes. (Yes, there is concrete poetry which is meant to be seen. We’ll get to that later.)
An iamb, as discussed previously, has one unaccented syllable followed by one accented syllable. I will bold/italic the accented syllables or words in the examples. For iamb, a familiar line:
Whose woods | these are | I think | I know
A trochee is the opposite of the iamb: one accented syllable followed by one unaccented syllable.
Once up | on a | midnight | dreary, | while I | pondered, | weak and | weary
An anapest has two unaccented syllables followed by one accented one. Sort of like an iamb with an extra syllable at the beginning.
From his saw- | pit of mouth, | from his char | nel of maw
A dactyl has an accented syllable followed by two unaccented ones – like a trochee with an extra syllable at the end. For your amusement, here is a poem by M. M. De Voe in a form called double-dactyl. I don’t think I need to mark the accented syllables.
Bouncity-Flouncity Pamela Anderson Flirting with silicon Under her top.
Diving for volleyballs Hyper-frenetically. Flashing a breast to a Day-player cop.
Very few poems have “perfect meter.” Generally, a poem that is primarily anapestic will have iambic feet as well, and one that is dactylic will have trochaic feet. Occasionally there are syllables within a poem which don’t fit into any of the four categories above, in which case they may have a foot which is spondaic, or has two accented syllables in a row; or one which is pyrrhic, or has two unaccented syllables in a row.
Taking all of that into consideration, how do you determine what a poetic foot is? Well, as I stated before, poetry is an art, and therefore scansion cannot be reduced to an exact science. Once you determine whether a poem is basically iambic/anapestic or dactylic/trochaic, you can sort out the feet which fit those forms perfectly and then see what you have left. There may be a single accented or unaccented syllable. For example, take the fourth line in the poem immediately above:
Under her | top.
In this case, you have an accented syllable on the end, and another accented syllable at the beginning of the next line:
Diving for | volleyballs
Since this is a light-hearted poem that is meant to be funny, you can see how, in reading this poem aloud, the speaker would naturally pause between the two accented syllables, giving the listener time to react to the humor before going on to the next line.
You can also see that the above line, “diving for volleyballs,” has two feet, as shown by the dividing line. Therefore the line is dactylic dimeter. Here are the names of the various poetic feet length:
1 – monometer 2 – dimeter 3 – trimeter 4 – tetrameter 5 – pentameter 6 – hexameter 7 – heptameter 8 – octameter 9 – nonameter
As I said in the beginning, it isn’t as important to remember the exact names as to understand the concept. If you want to write metered poetry, you might want to study rhythm and meter in more depth than this brief introduction. If your goal is to have poetry that “sings,” that reads smoothly and rhythmically, and you can’t figure out why a particular line isn’t working, use scansion to determine the primary metric form. Chances are, you may have mixed an iamb in with your dactyls. Don’t you just hate it when that happens? As promised, this week I will post a poll here on Multiply so that you may choose the next topic you would like to discuss. Poll ends at midnight Central Standard Time on Thursday, December 6.

What is poetry? That is the question, isn’t it? Is it the way that words are arranged on the page? Yes, but not always; look at Walt Whitman’s Leaves of Grass. Many of the lines in his poems look more like prose than poetry. Is it rhythm and rhyme? Yes, but not always; much of modern poetry does not incorporate rhyme or strict rhythmic forms.
Lewis Turco, author of The New Book of Forms: A Handbook of Poetics, says poetry is “the art of language… …what differentiates the poet from other writers is the focus on mode, on language itself. The poet focuses upon the literary resources of language in the same way a musician concentrates upon sound, the painter upon form, or the dancer upon movement.”
I like that. I like even better the definition given by American poet Gwendolyn Brooks: “Poetry is life distilled.” And better still, our own Honor74 says, “Poetry is the language of the soul. It's a language anyone can decipher, anyone can speak. It is universal as it encompasses all of the human experience while wrapping it up in feeling.”
While I do not possess the education, experience, nor expertise of either Turco or Brooks, I also have a definition for poetry. I would say simply, “Poetry is art.” And, just as beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I would say poetry is defined by the intent of the writer.
However, as with any art, the more you learn about poetry, the better you become at writing it. And the more you read poetry, the more inspired you become to write your own. So the first thing I would encourage anyone who aspires to write poetry to do is to read poetry – all kinds of poetry, from ancient to modern. And don’t just read casually. Analyze the poems you read. Why do you think the poet used that particular form to express the idea or emotion he/she is trying to convey? Was it simply the convention of the time in which he/she lived, or a deliberate choice? Do you find that one type or form of poetry resonates more with you than another?
Poetry Archive is a good site for finding different types of poems, if you don’t have other resources available to you.
The second thing I would recommend is to increase your vocabulary. The better your vocabulary, the more precisely you will be able to express yourself in your poetry. As Mark Twain said, “The difference between the almost right word and the right word is really a large matter – it's the difference between the lightning bug and the lightning.” If you have a My Yahoo! page, you might add “Word of the Day” from TheFreeDictionary and/or Dictionary.com. Or simply bookmark those two websites and peruse them when you have a free moment.
The third thing I would encourage you to do is to try to become more observant. It is easy to become so accustomed to our surroundings that we don’t really see or hear what is going on around us any more. Stop for a moment and look around. What objects do you see? What colors? What textures? Listen for a moment. What do you hear? The hum of your computer fan? The sound of others in your household or your workplace? Traffic in the distance? Music or a TV program?
What sensations are you feeling? Is your chair comfortable? Do you feel pain or discomfort anywhere? Are you hungry, or have you just eaten? What about emotionally? Are you happy, content, bored, tired, angry? What are the circumstances that brought about these emotions?
Try to make a habit of being more “in the moment” as often as possible. Notice the little details. Pay attention to how people relate to each other. Look for small flaws or aberrations – a tiny crack in an otherwise perfect tile floor, one green leaf left on a blazing red maple tree, an all-black cat with one splotch of white fur on its back.
M. Romeo suggests reading How to Think like Leonardo da Vinci by Michael J. Gelb to learn how to live more in the moment and increase your awareness.
It is a good idea to carry some kind of notebook with you so that whenever you see something that you find interesting or think of a particularly fine turn of phrase, you can write it down immediately. Those fleeting thoughts are soon forgotten if not recorded.
Many thanks to Honor74 and M. Romeo for their assistance and encouragement. Please note that although there is a poll on Yahoo 360 for this workshop, since it closes in approximately 51 minutes, I am not including it here. There will be a poll on Multiply on the next entry, which will be posted on Tuesday, December 4.
(Posted at Cristie's request.) Hi, my name is Dreamweaver [MoonChild on Multiply] and I am a logophile. I admit it. I love words. I love the sound of them and the sight of them. I love the way you can put them together and take them apart and twist them around and make something entirely new out of them. I love the way they can express emotions, spark ideas, make imaginations soar. I love their rhythms and rhymes and rollicking humor.
I love etymology. I can spend hours reading a dictionary, learning about the history of words, how they came into the language and how they have changed over the years.
I love wordplay. I can have fun reading the phone book. Seriously. Take out the Yellow Pages and look at the categories at the tops of the pages. The juxtaposition of words is sometimes unintentionally humorous: Chiropractic-Churches. Social-Sporting. Dogs-Driving. The same is true of dictionary headings. Try it sometime.
I have always loved poetry. No, let me qualify that. I have always loved some types of poetry. Other types of poetry I can appreciate, but I wouldn't necessarily read it for fun. Take Shakespeare, for example. Some of his sonnets are beautiful and meaningful and can bring you to tears, especially if you hear them read aloud by a skilled orator. But to be honest, I wouldn't sit down and read Shakespeare or Shelley or Milton unless I were particularly in the mood for that type of poetry.
My personal taste tends more toward modern poetry. Good free verse distills human experience down to its essence. Each word is carefully chosen; extraneous words are pruned without pity. Careful attention is paid to spacing, line breaks, and rhythm. The poet lays out a road map for the reader to follow by the way he or she paces the poem.
For a number of years, I wrote poetry instinctively, with no more knowledge or skill than what I had learned in high school. When I began to study poetry more seriously, I learned many things which fascinated and delighted me, but there was one thing that struck me viscerally as well as intellectually.
I think most of us remember "iambic pentameter" from our high school English classes. At least, we remember the words, if not their meaning. Let me refresh your memory a bit. An "iamb" is a unit of measure in a poem with two beats, the first unstressed and the second stressed: da DA. "Penta" = five, so pentameter means there are five units of measure (or five iambs) in each line:
da DA da DA da DA da DA da DA
Big deal, right? Two beats, accent on the second syllable, five feet per line.
Well, it is a big deal. Say it aloud: da DA. Remind you of anything? A heartbeat, maybe? And why five beats per meter? To make it more interesting, I will give you a few of lines of poetry to say aloud:
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? Thou art more lovely and more temperate: Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May. And summer's lease hath all too short a date:
Did you notice that each line is about as much as you can say with a comfortable, natural breathing pattern? One breath, say the first line. Second breath, say the second line.
That's right. The most common meter used in English poetry for hundreds of years is based not on lofty ideals or flights of fancy but on the natural rhythms of the human body.
When I learned that, I started to think about the thousands of years of oral history tradition. There were no books, no writing, no way of recording events. The storyteller, the bard, the poet served as the memory of the tribe or clan or village. And in order to remember the long and complicated stories (think of The Odyssey and The Iliad), they had to break it up into smaller sections and add rhythm and rhyme as memory aids.
Even farther back....picture a clan of people living in caves. The men have returned from a successful hunt. After everyone has had his or her fill of the hunters' trophy, the leader begins to tell the story of the hunt, with dramatic gestures and suspenseful pauses. And somewhere at the edge of the fire, a child watches, memorizing every movement and every blow...
Poetry is as old as language. As long as humans have been expressing themselves, there have been those who have had the desire to raise that expression to a higher level – to find the best words and put them in the best order.
My goal in these workshops is to share my love of poetry, poets, and poetic forms. We will discuss poetic devices such as alliteration, hyperbole, personification, imagery, rhythm, and rhyme. We will touch on some of the different poetic forms such as metered verse, blank verse, concrete poems, and abstract poems.
I hope some of these subjects will stimulate a dialogue which could help us all come to a better understanding of the subject at hand. Anyone who wishes to write a poem that incorporates the subject matter of a particular workshop is welcome to do so, but it will certainly not be a requirement.
So come along with me and see how much fun playing with words can be!
Look for the first workshop next Tuesday, November 27.
Hello all, Cristie again. A slight issue has come up regarding the WB blog and I am here to clear it up, for everyone. The main blog for Writer's Block is intended for the bi-weekly picture challenges and any admin announcements, such as this one. While members have the capability to make blog posts in Writer's Block, it is my preference that they do not; personal blogs, public announcements, etc should be made in the Notes/Bulletin Board section of Writer's Block. There are a couple of reasons for this: - To maintain the integrity of the group and keep it on-topic. If everyone begins to post whatever strikes their fancy, then the focus of the group will be lost. No matter if the post is viewed as a public service, a birth announcement or group hello.
- To prevent spam. As on any blog platform, there are unscrupulous people who will post advertisements anywhere (MySpace, anyone?) even under the guise of a member.
The only exceptions to this would be the posting of writing workshops and the planned author interviews. I cannot block the blog from being used. The only option I have is deletion of the post. I knew this when I started the group here, and I should have anticipated problems cropping up. So, to avoid any bent noses or hurt feelings in the future, I have to make an addendum to the rules regarding posting. Also, I must define the meaning of Writer's Block and the term 'challenge'. Writer's Block is for the sole purpose of testing and showcasing authors, while providing feedback, by providing a bi-weekly challenge that involves writing about the picture submitted for that challenge. 'Challenge' is being used here to define the bi-weekly posts in which the picture is submitted and authors may write whatever they wish about that picture. This is not personal. As admin, I have to think about the entire group, not just one or two members. I do not gain anything from running the group, other than the pleasure of meeting and interacting with new people and reading their offerings. To the contrary, I have to run the risk of abuse and unpleasantness in order to draw the hard line to maintain a sense of order so that we have a decent environment in which to submit our written works. My only other option would be to move the group yet again and make it a personal blog, rather than a group, in order to have more control over posting options and content. I'm hoping it doesn't have to get to that point, that we can all be adults and accept the rules. To reiterate: - The main Writer's Block blog is only for bi-weekly challenges, admin announcements, author interviews and writing workshops.
- Personal posts, announcements, personal challenges, etc, should be made on the Bulletin Board (Notes).
- A challenge is the bi-weekly picture post issued in this group. Writer's Block is here to showcase those challenges.
On a side note, I am looking for an additional admin to help monitor the group. I would prefer an older member, who knows how the group functions, but would not preclude a newcomer. You may email me privately if you are interested. Thank you for listening, everyone.
|  | |  | Published - Asthma Foundation (October 2007 Newsletter DANGERS OF ASTHMA! By Riki aka Erika Long Asthma is serious illness that affects millions of Australians. Asthma is where a person's airways to the lungs are sensitive; it causes the airways to tighten with mucus build up. It then restricts the ability to breathe properly. If Asthma is treated incorrectly, ignored, or is severe enough it can have major consequences including death. Asthma can be triggered by dust, smoke, cold weather or aerosols. Symptoms of Asthma can include wheezing, coughing and tightness of the chest. My name is Erika Long, I am twenty five years of age. I am one of the people whose Asthma was treated incorrectly, leading me to a severe Asthma attack at the age of nine. I am also one the people who was lucky enough to cheat death. At the age of four I was diagnosed with Asthma, I was an intelligent, athletic and a happy child. I knew what I wanted to be in life, a lawyer. I was a straight A student with everything ahead of me but because my Asthma was mistreated I lost it all. Doctors prescribed me with a Ventolin inhaler in which they said to use when ever I felt I needed it. I used it that regularly that it masked the seriousness of my condition. A certain doctor even went to the point of telling my grandmother to put cotton wool in her ears so that my coughing wouldn't disturb her at night. My Asthma was incredibly severe but because the doctors refused to see it and treat properly, it led to a very serious attack. In August 1991, I was nine years old. I went into Cardiac Arrest from an acute attack. My heart stopped for approximately three minutes declaring me clinically dead. I was left with an acquired brain injury. At the time of my attack I was left with no functions, the ability to eat, speak, see, move was taken away. I spent ten days in the Intensive Care Unit, and another three weeks in the children's ward. I was put under intense physio, speech and occupation therapy. I was then sent to another hospital for approximately ten weeks under going more intense treatment. I was fed through a naesel-gastric tube, losing up six kilos in weight. Under the head Neurologist there I was diagnosed not only with an acquired brain injury but with Parkinson symptoms too. Luckily enough I was not affected intellectually, although my ability to learn things was a lot slower. I had lost all use of my left hand, it was clenched into a fist, and my right leg was a major problem also. After incredible efforts from doctors and my parents I regained the ability to speak, eat and move. It took years of hard work. I now get around by wheel chair, I can walk with assistance and my speech is almost normal again. I shake constantly from the Parkinson symptoms, but am far better than I was. I've seen numerous doctors about different things; in 2005 I started getting Botox injections in my left hand. I can now open it, and use it to a degree. I am on thirty three tablets a day to help my brain injury, some for Parkinson's, Depression, spasticity to the limbs and head aches. My disability has caused many dramas in my life, through school I was teased. As an adult it's incredibly hard to find work and in general it's just hard to fit in. Asthma is a very serious illness, it needs to be treated correctly, if you feel your Asthma isn't being treated properly always seek a second opinion. It is vital for your well being to be healthy and not end up in a wheel chair with various conditions from being mistreated. | | |
Hi guys, Cristie here again. Normally I would wait a few days after the posted challenge to blog again, but I didn't feel like leaving anyone on tenterhooks. I posted polls on both the 360 and Multiply Writer's Block blogs; the overwhelming majority voted for Multiply. However, I have opted for a variation of the third choice, in order to try to keep everyone happy. First off, both blogs will remain open. There are those members of Writer's Block on Multiply who are not refugee 360 members and vice versa, so it is not fair to those members to expect them to change blogging platforms or not participate. This group has become bigger and we have to be cognizant of that fact. Second, Kira aka Dreamweaver has volunteered to help out with the links and upkeep on the 360 site. This is a huge relief to me and I appreciate it tremendously. That will leave me with the upkeep of the Multiply Writer's Block *note: I finally figured out how to do custom themes, hehe!* Third, from now on we will be doing challenges on a bi-weekly basis. Several members have mentioned to me that they would like to have more time to focus on a piece, and I have to say I don't blame them. This isn't a drive-thru, LOL. This will put less of a rush on everyone in posting and commenting, as well as Dreamweaver and I coming up with new challenge pics and upkeep, in addition to doing our own writing. Fourth, since there will be a longer stretch between challenges, I thought this would be an opportune time to do other things, such as interview our authors and do a 'highlight' on that author in between challenges, writing tips, tutorials, etc, etc. If any of you think you might have something to add which would be helpful to the group, feel free to run it by me. I'm on most days. That just about covers it. I'd like to thank everyone for their patience in allowing me to get this sorted and make this transition from 360 to Multiply and back again a smooth one. I also welcome all new members and thank you for joining us and sharing your talents. 
- Hi guys, Cristie aka Honor here. This past week we hosted Writer's Block both at 360 and at our new site on Multiply. If you posted a challenge response on a Multiply page, it was linked on the Multiply site; if you posted one on 360, it was linked on the 360 WB blog. If you posted on both, it was linked at both places. Most chose to post on both blogging platforms. The number of responses was almost the same, 18 for Multiply and 20 for 360.
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- This past week has also shown me that I cannot keep up with both blogs, gathering links, posting them and then attempting to do my own piece and comment. Not to mention my busy schedule as a mom and childcare center director. 360's obvious problems have also hindered that; one night you can post and the next you can't.
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- But, instead of simply saying, hey, we're moving permanently, I'll put it to a vote. There is a poll attached to this blog; please vote whether you would like to remain on 360, go to Multiply from now on or a third option, which would be me turning over the 360 Writer's Block to someone else while I run the Multiply site.

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